I agree that the bullet points feel like ChatGPT output. Whether an LLM was involved or not, it's good practice nowadays to avoid that AI style as many are getting used to spotting it and frown about it.
* Gerund Adjective Noun (bold): (colon) text (non-bold).
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Already the format like this. Then plus points for sounding like an empty phrase that chatgpt likes. Eg from the heading "Addressing Unmet Needs" then bullet "Empowering SaaS Developers:" in bold.
It's hard to describe. If you use chatgpt a lot, you develop an intuition that has many components.